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13 dic. 2009

You and I.

In an eternal fight with my heart,
in the mysterious river where I lost my head ,
my focus is your breath,
I'm just trying to find a rest...

Of the modern wars I've fought against you,
I only remember the ones I’ve lost,
being worse than I can be,
knowing there were wars, that I couldn’t win.

I'm so sorry, I just went for glory,
but don't worry, I will change.
Don´t be surprise, if I try to love you,
more dificult was to find you; I'm not going to lose you.

I promise, I will never leave you,
I will never hurt you, I will just live for you.
Spectrum that I find in my head, child that one day open my heart,
beautiful princess that appears in my dreams.

You diguised my soul,
trying to appear better than I am,
trying to uncover my real feelings,
trying to find a place next to me...

3 comentarios:

  1. [modo irónico on] Sublime [modo irónico off] jaja es coña ta bien tio jaja

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  2. If you let me help you change a few things, it will be a superb job. In fact, it's already a great poem. You've got talent, boy.
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  3. Te reescribo el poema. Sólo hay dos versos que no he entendido bien, trata de reescribirlos con lo que quieres decir. Son el versos 15 y 17. Believe me, it's amazing how good your english is. These little mistakes you made are just a few silly things you can get over easy.

    In an eternal fight with my heart,
    in the mysterious river where I lost my head ,
    my focus is your breath,
    I'm just trying to find a rest...

    Of the modern wars I've fought against you,
    I only remember the ones I’ve lost,
    being worse than I can be,
    knowing there were wars, that I couldn’t win.

    I'm so sorry, I just went for glory,
    but don't worry, I will change.
    Don´t be surprise, if I try to love you,
    more dificult was to find you; I'm not going to lose you.

    I promise, I will never leave you,
    I will never hurt you, I will just live for you.
    Spectrum that I find in my head, child that one day open my heart,
    beautiful princess that appears in my dreams.

    You diguised my soul,
    trying to appear better than I am,
    trying to uncover my real feelings,
    trying to find a place next to me...

    ResponderEliminar